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Unrivaledfury
Unrivaledfury
November 5, 2018 5:25 pm

(dolls with warmth…) How far will you deny the reality?
Thanks for the chapter.

daiz71
daiz71
November 5, 2018 5:47 pm

Thanks

Kenjita
Kenjita
November 5, 2018 11:40 pm

Anyone else find the authors writing style a little too verbose? He got the point across after about two or three sentences with his description but kept putting in filler to reach over a paragraph. Feels a little like when a student is doing some kind of minimum length essay and needs to expand on something mundane because they don’t have enough substance to reach the requirement. Still a decent story but if he keeps up that habit of his I’m not sure how much more of it I could take; I guess I could also just try and develop… Read more »

Paps
Paps
November 6, 2018 3:54 pm

Thanks for the chapter, quite the romantic feeling at the end there.

darkLoki
darkLoki
December 17, 2018 9:44 pm

Thanks for the chapter, this final give a bad after taste

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